Monday, 22 October 2018

Loose Reins

Another desperate attempt at a palindrome poem.  Someday...I'll still find it difficult

Your broken heart gave
The soul poisoned drain
Can you win if
You fight too. 
Will you know more
 torture in your
Room giving
Free pain
Loose reins
*
Loose reins
Pain free
Giving room
You're in torture
 no more
You will to fight you
If win you can
Drain poisoned soul then
Give your heart a break
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3 comments:

  1. ms_lili22 October 2018 at 17:29

    you got the message across!

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  2. Shuku23 October 2018 at 04:43

    This really worked well! Yeah, I find the form difficult too, but with practice (I always say that and then I forget). You've done fantastically :)

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  3. Esther Jones23 October 2018 at 07:57

    I like it. You did better than I did.

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