Thursday 3 October 2019

The womb I have

The Womb I Have.
(A florette)

The womb I have I wear outside 
Royal jewels I can not hide
In the process doing thier part
But I would not be smart to say I'm full of pride

The womb I have inside my mind
Is fertile soil to be mined
Ideas the seed heart gestated 
With time incubated full grown fruit to 
find


The womb I have is in my house
Where I can hide a quiet mouse
Weary bones lie to rise reborn
Time given without scorn allowed by my sweet spouse


The womb I have does not exist
Why would I think it could be wished
I had the right to force a law
In logic there's the flaw and the point has been missed 

4 comments:

  1. I like how you chose to utilize the prompt. You commented on Morgan's post that you were thrown for a loop but I think you did quite well. :)

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  2. I'm amazed at the variety of responses to the prompt. Your poem begins with strong images and a sense of appreciation for a 'womb' as a metaphor for reflection, a gift for all writers.
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