Showing posts with label observation. Show all posts
Showing posts with label observation. Show all posts

Tuesday, 1 October 2013

This Poem is for the Birds.

(Intro: Writing is sometimes about observation. After dropping my wife off, I had an hour to kill before work. I drove to a little park nearby that I occasionally park at, sit in my car and eat my bagged lunch. I noticed some birds. For the whole time, I studied and sketched them. Not being a bird watcher, I had no idea what they were. Perhaps, someone in the know may be able to identify them for me.)

This Poem is for the Birds

I.
An hour before nine on a crisp prairie autumn morning,

walking in the trim dewy grass, they came.

A flock smaller than a robin, bigger than a finch invaded the park.

Politely they hopped and pecked for breakfast in the turf.

Red and yellow golden leaves danced in the tutu of morning fog.

Thin dark beaks sewed a woodpecker's tattoo silently into the lawn.

When they stopped their energetic hunt to swallow their bounty,

some displayed dark moustached circles beside their bills.

Between neck and chest they wore a black insignia patch.

Like military rank some were bars, chevrons, and some just a smile.

Against the chill was a red or scarlet square scarf upon the nape.

Their brown or dark beige shawl sported tiger stripes.

Black tipped tan wings wore a checked twill tweed design.

Their under shirt faded from tan to white bedecked with dots.

Suddenly they took to flight flashing white under tails like deer.

II. 

The swooping prairie gulls bullied their way in 

flapping grey letterman's wings at the nerd birds.

Blunted beaks like an old boxer's nose

harshly blared a stringent call like a ship in the fog.

Proud barrel chests aggressively pushed their own for a scrap.

Bandy flat footed legs gave them an old salt's drunken rolling gait.

Yet, when they flew it was arrow straight and no nonsense.    

Tuesday, 30 October 2012

Saskatchewan, plain and tall.

Saskatchewan is a minimalist's paradise.

My wife's dad would joke,

"Art is easy there. One straight line across the page,

and you've drawn the landscape."

Yes, hard to pronounce--easy to draw!

Look hard enough and squint,

you see the back of your own head.

I know all the jokes.

The joke is the poor BC people.

I was one not long ago.

They are so blessed by a bounty of beauty, 

they cannot see the elegance of solid simplicity.

There, a curve is just another one of many.

Who notices?

But when you drive like an arrow and then get thrown a curve ball,

it's exciting!

Hills, valleys, rivers? They've got hundreds, each prettier than the last one.

When you suddenly drop out of the monotony into a dale

out here, you really notice it.

Then there is the sky, the endless, ever changing, panoramic, living skies.

We are people of such faith we said to the mountains,

"Be thou removed and cast into the sea."

They were blocking the view.

Out there, it's like, "Look at the beautiful sunse...oh it's gone behind a hill."

As we drive, we see a miles high cloud bank like a great wall.

To the left is azure fields of sky with wispy sheep of clouds.

To the right is God's own pastel palette air-brushed by the setting sun

and decorated with brushstroke slashes of rain falling miles away.

Behind us the night is steadily sneaking up like a swarm of grasshoppers.

You just have to open up your heart and see.